“Shared Notes & Highlights” for Dover Beach
How come I never noticed Amazon’s “Shared Notes & Highlights” section before? According to Amazon, these are “the thoughts and passages that Kindle readers have shared while reading this book.”...
View ArticleI am loathe to criticize anyone but . . .
I have a somewhat respectable day job in which I’m supposed to oversee a couple dozen highly experienced writers. In the past week, two different writers have sent me emails containing a sentence like...
View ArticleFaulkner on inspiration
Two of my favorite writing quotations come from William Faulkner: I only write when I’m inspired. Fortunately, I’m inspired at nine o’clock every morning. And in a similar vein: I don’t know anything...
View ArticleWhere All the Ladders Start
I have looked at the novel I’ve been working on in all different seasons, at all different times of day, and I have finally decided its title is Where All the Ladders Start. Readers of a poetical...
View ArticleThe Old Manse
Like Walden Pond, the Old Manse in Concord, MA is another American literary shrine just minutes away from where I work. I visited it decades ago, but a couple of weeks ago the entire company got to go...
View ArticleCopywriting for dummies: tooting my own horn
One of the challenges of being an independent author is that you’re responsible for everything associated with publishing your book, including editing, cover design, and marketing. I haven’t outsourced...
View ArticleDo world-class writers have world-class editors?
This question occurred to me as I read Haruki Murakami’s new novel, Colorless Tsukuri Tazaki And His Years of Pilgrimage (why can’t I come up with catchy titles like that?). Murakami is clearly a...
View ArticleHere’s the first chapter of my new novel
As I mentioned, the book is called Where All the Ladders Start. Those of you who have read its predecessors, Dover Beach and The Distance Beacons, will notice that I use a standard private-eye opening...
View ArticleWhy Amazon is not a monopoly
Franklin Foer of The New Republic has joined the ranks of folks with Amazon Derangement Syndrome; take a look at this article. The best response I’ve seen is this blog post at the Washington Post (now...
View ArticleJack London
… was born here: Which isn’t so far from here: Baseball! Writing! Go Giants!
View ArticleBad advice for writers; also not funny
At first I thought this article on Bad Advice for Writers was pretty funny: Advice #4: Correct negative reviews There are only two types of reviews: the positive kind, and the kind where the reviewer...
View ArticleWriters in movies: The Romantic Englishwoman
Another in a random series. The Romantic Englishwoman is a 1975 movie with A-list credentials: it stars Michael Caine and Glenda Jackson, it’s co-written by Tom Stoppard, and it’s directed by Joseph...
View ArticleFirst sentences
I finally got around to starting my new novel today. I wrote the first sentence, which goes like this: I was standing in the snack-food aisle of the 7-11 when I saw her. Pretty good, huh? Let’s...
View Article“Birdman” and Chekhov’s Gun
Birdman has gotten great reviews for its acting and its zippy direction. Underneath the long tracking shots and the magic realism, though, it’s a pretty standard backstage drama, the kind that would...
View ArticleHappy belated birthday to William Blake
I seemed to have missed it by a day. Here is his great poem “London”. Did anyone ever write a better phrase than “mind-forg’d manacles”? And did any two words ever pack more of a punch than...
View ArticleIn which NaNoWriMo makes me feel bad
I was talking to a woman at work today. She’s had some health problems, but she’s feeling better and has a bit more energy. As a result, she told me, she just participated in National Novel Writing...
View ArticleHigh standards in publishing
Here’s a passage from Kurt Vonnegut’s first novel, Player Piano (1952), which imagines a world in which managers and engineers run the world. A woman is explaining why she has become a prostitute....
View ArticleThe hardest thing about writing fiction…
. . . is transitions. I have spent most of the day getting my characters from one place to another. They were doing something interesting in the place they left. I am confident that they’ll do...
View ArticleIn a league where success whithers away like a desiccated flower…
This over-the-top image is from a column in this morning’s Boston Globe talking about the Patriots. Notice the atrocity perpetrated on the poor word wither. It’s an odd mistake, because even my...
View ArticleBuilding worlds, and remembering them
A while back I told a friend of mine that I was working on the third book in my Last P.I. series (it’s called Where All the Ladders Start and it will be available incredibly soon now). He asked me,...
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